you are in my eyes

Walking through a dream,My light in darkness breathing hope of new life.
my senses touch your world I never pictured.
Now I you my hope to you,I give up everything,I pray in my heart that you will never go away, when my heart was never open and my
spirit never free to the world that you have shown me.but my eyes could not division all the colours of love and of life ever more,ever  
more

Now I you my hope to you ,I pray in my heart ...
翻译出来是一种怎样的感觉啊
真的是 只可意会不可言传？？

没有别的意思啊
可是 在中英思想表达上 有一点点不同了
主要的是 是想让你在英语中 有一些进步了

..........别说的那么直白

说婉转一点

okay?

谁都知道哪个地方有点......

这是神马意思？